by: Nick C.

It was a great poem. It was very discriptive and it also had great imagery. It also gave a great perspective on how dull the Battle of Gettysburg was.

by: Clara F

I thought your poem was great. I really like how descriptive it was.

by: Jes J.

I really enjoyed the poem. It was very well written.

by: Zack D.

Very well written. I felt like I was in the Civil War. By the way, you are missing an “n” in cannon.

by: Anonymous

I thought that this poem really described how the Civil War was really misery. It really showed that the Civil War was nothing, but the destruction of ourselves.

by: Anonymous

It’s pretty good but needs a little bit more to it.

by: Jacob B

I think your poem is very good.

by: Matt C.

That was a very deep poem that I enjoyed. It was if I were actually in the Civil War. Also, there are no Canon cameras in the Civil War.

by: Jake L.

I thought this poem was great, I thought the imagery was brilliant. I also liked all the references to Civil War music.

by: Anonymous

Great poem, very historical.

by: Anonymous

Your poem was so amazing! Really good imagery. 🙂

by: Anonymous

great poem!

by: Cathy

This is awesome, I can actually visualize the men walking the fields

by: Gloria

Great poem, Paul. I had no idea that you are so talented.

by: Lois Stewart

Paul, very nice & well done! I enjoyed reading this.

by: Cathy

Anyone who has walked those fields knows and understands this. Well done